Definitely blog writing help me to change my
mind about production and ownership of knowledge. When we started our semester, Gary said “This
will help you when you do your job acquirement”. First time, I didn’t
understand what Gary’s intention. As I do Gary’s homework I understand what
Gary’s purpose. I think Gary’s intention of blog posting is production and
ownership of knowledge. Blog posting is Kind of symposium in the
point of posting something public. This means that if you made great achievement you don’t make it public in anyway. It means nothing!! People don’t
know what you’ve done. Same thinking is applied to blog posting. Blog posting
means to me as a great achievement. If I do my work, this works made to public.
This means ownership. Gary’s homework made me to think about knowledge ownership and my
point of view is changed.
Dear Duki,
답글삭제I read your paragraph interestingly. I agree your opinion that Gary's intention of blog posting is understanding of production and ownership of knowledge. Your writing is good, but I suggest you to correct some mistakes. I think you should change ‘Kind’ into ‘kind’ because capitalization rule doesn’t apply to it. In addition, you should check 'D.C., I.C.'. You wrote 'This means that if you made great achievement you don't make it public in anyway.', but you should add comma if dependent clause is first.
Thanks,
Sojin
Hi Duki,
답글삭제I enjoyed reading your posting. I agree with most of yours. I also could improve my English skills through gary's blog posting assignments as you did. But I recommend you to improve several things in your paragraph. First, I recommend you to use more commas in the right place. I had a little difficulty discriminating your sentences because there are no proper commas between sentences. Second, I recommend you to use the orders like first, second to list your contents of the paragraph. If you correct these things, I think your posting will be more clear. .
Best wishes,
Ahram
Hi Duki,
답글삭제I think we had same thought. Actually, I also think that knowledge that is not shared is useless. I made many reports, but I threw away them because I didn't know the way to share. I think posting knowledge we made is nice to make it meaningful.
Thanks,
Hyeong-eun